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Post by grace on Jan 28, 2010 14:13:39 GMT -5
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Post by yukarana on Jan 28, 2010 14:33:57 GMT -5
Hey there, You're pretty good. I love the way you shaded the second one, and love the design too! The shape is a little off in places (the back shouldn't be one straight line), but that's really down to practice. If you want, I can redline one or both pictures (someone did the same for me once and it really helped!), but they're pretty decent already. Keep it up!
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Post by grace on Jan 28, 2010 14:47:05 GMT -5
Thanks! They're mostly smudge tool and dodge/burn images, and it would be amazing if you could red line them. ^^ I'm not very good at anatomy.
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Post by yukarana on Jan 28, 2010 15:27:32 GMT -5
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Post by grace on Jan 28, 2010 16:34:38 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by Armagare on Jan 28, 2010 16:47:15 GMT -5
grace wernt you the one who drew the Bearar on kaylune? *forgot*
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Post by grace on Jan 28, 2010 17:01:34 GMT -5
No, unfortunately I didn't do any Kaylune art. I'm not sure who did draw the Bearar, but if you didn't know already, Kaylune's back. kaylunevps.ismywebsite.com/kaylune/
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Post by DragonMossstar on Jan 28, 2010 17:49:33 GMT -5
*pokes Grace* I think they're great! =] But you should try doing what Yuka advised-the wolves' faces could use a little work. Remember to make sure that everything is the right size-that's a big downer if it's not! xP (Like, the ears are too small on the first one... And I think the eyes are too big, BUT I could be wrong. I'm no expert)
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Post by AllieKat on Jan 29, 2010 13:44:27 GMT -5
You're not bad ^^ the anatomy needs some work though, want me to find some helpful tutorials for you?
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Post by grace on Jan 29, 2010 15:53:06 GMT -5
Thanks. Tutorials would be good. ^^
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